I saw a dream with open eyes
I believed it to be true…
It was colorful, it was bright
It was everything a dream ought to be
The days and nights melted together
The sunshine was perfect, the moon luminous
There was happiness and blessed peace
The pain in the heart suddenly stopped
The tears from the eyes never flowed
The past and future melded together
The body and mind welded together
There were smiles and laughter galore
I looked at my dream, so pure and true
Ordered from the heavens above
Everything was what I wanted so
There was ne’er a doubt nor a glimmer
Never did my soul have a shiver
Everything appeared perfect, everything warm
I didn’t think, I didn’t realise…
A thing so perfect is never real
The cracks appeared, the surface trembled
The dream appeared, moving far
I blinked, I ran
I followed the dream
I cried, I screamed
I pleaded and crawled
I did everything I humanly could
I ran through the forest
I ran through the plains
I ran through the mountains
I ran through the beaches
When I ran through the desert
I realized so
The dream stood still ahead of me
It looked foreboding and dangerous now
It blocked so I could no longer follow
I looked up at the daunting sun
I looked down at the heated sand
My eyes opened, my memory clicked
I realized where everything stood
I couldn’t believe, my legs couldn’t hold
My heart shattered a million pieces
My head with hundred thoughts
In such a time what I believed
The dream was nothing but a Mirage
So untrue and false
Ringing the shades of truth..
I loved truly as only a woman can
But was never loved back as I should be
The heart which spoke of true love
Was ne’er real, ne’er true
The trust I had on love thrown back
I was just a slice of time, forgotten forever
I saw a Mirage with open eyes
And I believed it to be true….
— a true heart is never false
a false heart, never true
112 Responses
too good 👍👌👏👏
Thank you so much for reading… I hope you find good people in life Nath. All my good wishes for you.
Absolutely mam… Good people are always with me like you…
Yes very true and you still haven’t learned to call me shalini 😉😉😂😂
Haha… but I like to call u only mam😊
Yes, my child I know… How’s this??😉😉😂😂
Whatever you call me… Accepted 😂
Hahaha then I would prefer Nath sir😉😉😂😂
No I’m not a sir 🙈🙈… Actually jo muze intelligent😎 lagte hai mai unhe mam bolta hu😊
Hahaha, main unhe sir bulati hoon.
Waise bhi “Nath sir” cute sound karta hai 😉😉
Ok done 😉😉😂😂
Done
“a true heart is never false
a false heart, never true” these lines, they are beautiful.🌻
The poem is so captivating. Just too good 🙂
My blossoms, thank you for reading. How are you doing, girl
I’m doing good. How about you?
And, it was a pleasure to read 🙂
Aww girl you are always a pleasure to have around
That’s why I pinch myself whenever I come across something “so perfect”… just to wake up!
Hahaha… That’s cool. Will keep that tip in mind 😉😉
Or .. I will “remote pinch” you! 😀
Hahaha no wonder my arm is hurting today… It’s all due to you Raj hahaha 😂😂
Whatever it is I love dreams… but only when I am aware that ts a dream.. Its a perfect world to be in.
Great… I am happy for you. We all need our oasis
You kept me engrossed throughout. Lovely poem with a perfect ending.
Thank you my Jeni girl…
You’re welcome.
Hello Shalini! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing! And nice day to you.
Hello Sir, thank you so much for the honor. Sir, I have commented on your post on fear I think it may have gone to the spam folder. Kindly check that
Thanks for your comment. I just responded
Thank you sir
A wonderful read this morning, thank you.
Aww… Jay.. Thank you..this post has been in my draft since long till I published.
When is your blog tour starting
How long did it take to write? The tour starts on 11/5. We just confirmed the discount pricing and promotion plan which I’ll announce in early November. 🙂
Writing came from the heart, so didn’t take much time… But words got added when I went back to read it. Today I realized I am forgotten easily. So I published.
Great.. Waiting for your blog tour.
I am there for your next book tour… You can play favourites then 😉😉😂😂
You have beautiful imagery. 🙂 Proud!
And thank you! Good plan.
Thank you… As I said you see into my soul… That’s why you see what most don’t.
Yp I am planning ahead booking my place in my favourite author’s blog tour in the near future hehehe
I am excited to see more of those types of posts from you.
They come when words come… Will keep you posted. Till then it is book reviews 😉
Profond poem. Really enjoy reading you Shalini. As much as I like your book reviews, I must say that this type of writing from you really speaks to me. Magnifique! -Dominique
Thank you so much for such beautiful words. These words come when I get intense feeling, pain happiness sadness etc.. Your emotions have really come through in your emotions… Thank you once again Dominique
Wow that’s deep and meanginful!
Talent is in there x
Hi thank you so much… Yp I agree some days the talent is there, and most days it’s just book reviews
Nice poem
Thank you
Welcome
Hi, I have nominated you for the Liebster blogging Awards…..http://mydailyjournalonline.com/liebster-award-2017-nominations/ …..kindly check it out and follow the format, post it, share it, nominate your fellow friends and bloggers surely……Congrats 🙂
Thank you so much. Great answers, fun questions…
Yep…..I loved answering those questions too…..:)…..and I shall be waiting to read your answers….:)
Hehehe man are you assuming I am doing the award in the next post… I am bad at awards.. I have 8 pending… I just saw your blog it’s beautiful. The format and the way you have done this award, everything was peefecf
Its ok…whenever you wish to do is fine….:)…..yes, I am enjoying my current premium Theme and the wide range of customization options available…..:)…….I am a novice in awards……two uptil now….:):)
People got fed up in nominating me as I do awards rarely so now I don’t get nominated… Hehehe. I would love answer your questions they seem interesting… But the setting up of logos, original links, linking you, linking next few bloggers… That’s the part where my brain stops. My brain “you are a doctor, ask me about anaesthesia for appendectomy not links for logos and nominations.” I am berated by my brain till I end up throwing my gadgets… Hence the snail pace for doing awards
I understand….:):)….I was also like you some months back when I first started blogging…..I learnt everything by trial and error……there’s always a first time for everything……:)
I did a couple of awards. It took me 3 hours 12 to 3 am to finish… I showed the white flag and surrendered it’s too difficult
And people nominate you not expecting that you will do a return post, but they nominate you because they think your blog is great….:)
Awww…. That’s so sweet… I only write reviews on books. And sometimes my thoughts on certain topics
You guys do a far better and variety of posts… Yours make better knowledge
And then I am not very good at doing book reviews…….so that’s one thing I will have to learn from you.
Hahaha Anindya, I used to talk about books which I have read with mom, she got fed up so I started writing
:):)…..and you are doing a damn good job at that……:)
Hahaha some would say I am just talking to myself aloud. Hehehe
Thank you so much.
I like talking with you….:)
Thank you so much. Ditto. I like talking to you too
Perfect*
Beautiful ! Enjoyed reading it !!
Thank you so much Megala…
Amazing poetry.
Thank you so much for your kind words. It’s nice to hear that from a precise and clear headed writer. Your writings are great
Thank you for the kind words!
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Thank you so much
Its great, so its always a pleasure. Have a nice week. 😉
Some days… some words…. Sometimes … Have a great week Michael
Thank you, Shalini! Same to you, too.. Now we can count the hours for the weekend. LOL Michael
True that
Great! There is nothing more to say. 😉 Michael
Aww Michael thank you so much… Your comments are much appreciated..
Thank you for this wonderful piece of literature.
Nah… Just something I realised in the past few days
Good evening 🐞
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Good evening
Great poem….excellent choice of words….how do we separate good heart from a bad one from the start…what may be bad for us, can be good for someone else….how do we define that….should we say that what is bad for me is bad and ignore the world….or consider it good…if it helps someone else.
It is individualistic. We have to judge each heart for ourselves. And choose what is good for us.
Yeah…i thought so…good!!
Like i said…post more of those drafts….love to read more!!😄😄
Hahaha… Thanks to you, I don’t keep many posts in drafts, I publish in a few days as the incident happens
Thats good…why keep it hidden and frown…when u can share and smile!!👏👏
Beautiful lines ma’am 👌👌😊
Hello Sir thank you so much. I am shalini
Hello ma’am , I am Saksham .
Some days some times words come to me
But these words are awesome 👌👌
Magical……last lines were AWESOME…
Thank you so much for reading and writing your words of encouragement
Pleasure’s all mine…
Aww that’s so sweet of you
This is too incredible❤
Thank you so much. Rarely I write
Wonderfully written. Quite poignant 💕
Thank you so much for your kind words