Originally posted on Anindya’s blog as my guest post—
You entered my life as a friend
You pretended goodness, when you really were a fiend
You behaved in a manner which was helpful
I grew complacent thinking you wouldn’t be hurtful
I believed in you, trusting your way
I slept peacefully keeping fear at bay
I thought nothing could go wrong
I was right till everything went wrong
Quietly you showed what you really are
There you laid your true colours bare.
You were the spark that started silently
You were the snake behind, that moved creepily
You attacked when I was unaware
You entered the protection of my lair
You shattered my peace when your anger flared
You stole everything of that I cared
You tore into the cloth to reach the skin
You drove into the skin to cause the burn
You responded to nothing till your anger sated
I could do nothing as you repeatedly baited
You destroyed everything in your wake
My dream, my support, you proved to be utterly fake
I trusted you not to harm me and mine
I thought you would always shine
I prayed to the forces to keep you bound.
You broke free, unleashed your powers found
The path was a wave of destruction forever
The sight embedded in my brain all time, ever
Ashes to ashes was all I saw
Smoky tears was all I felt
Fear at your attitude leapt upon my heart
I became frozen from inside out
You can be sorry, you can do your penance
I still know you can turn menace
A second is all it takes
For you to claim your preys
You can do everything, but I still know the truth
Trust once gone, is gone forever
I watch you with eyes wary
You proved to be nothing but scary
You harmed the person who is precious to me
You tried to play master when you served me
Oh hark thee and hark thee well
For that, and just for that, I’ll never forgive
I wish, I really wish that you remain in the pits of hell…
Fire is a good servant but a bad master, so beware and be careful.
A single moment of inattention can become months of pain.
Burns are the worst to treat so Protect your loved ones….
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Strong piece. Thank you so much for the share, Shalini!
Thank you. I had written it a month ago when there was fire at home
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Why the hearts??
Only…
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Thank you
Shalini, I am speechless. But I wanted to tell you that your words touch me. Always a little anxious to comment as I fear my translation from French to English won’t be accurate. Can I possibly qualify such a sad story as a beautiful piece? Beautifully written it is but immensely sad. Big hug.
Oh Dominique, that’s so sweet of you. It was a tough time last month. Fire at home, mom’s outfit caught on fire, she got burnt a bit. I was so angry and scared and kind of numb. So these words were written on such a day
Very strong piece. Maybe I am wrong but while I was reading I couldn’t help thinking that the feelings in this piece fear on some even deeper level… Have a great week Shalini.
Yp… Some fear some anger… It was everything in combination
You are a darling Dominique
Very heart touching words
If it had power to understand feelings, then you might have got a 1000 apologies; rather it would not have hurted anyone actually.
I hope you have recovered from that completely
Oh yes, my family and I have recovered from it.. Fear and precaution will be there always
This poetry is depicts what you hope ,and what it leads! You keep flying in fairy tales, but once you realise this not the right way, you try to get back ,but submit everything, why mourning now! But yeah curse..
Nice one
Thank you
Welcome
I didn’t understand
I am sorry what are you talking about
These are not words on domestic violence nor is this a place to vent your anger on things happening on your blog. If anyone does not understand this simple fact, please don’t comment.
This is my blog, my words. I am just expressing my thoughts not crying for attention or screaming at injustice
A well crafted and a very strong piece.
Thank you so much…
Some days words come when I feel strong emotions
Yes, I see it here,
Sometimes all we need is to feel, strong emotions, which lead to such wonderful pieces of yours 🙂
True…
Hopefully I don’t see anymore sights like this, fire in the kitchen, mom getting burnt…
I hope you don’t!!
Yp I hope so too. The nightmare is still there in my eyes….
These thoughts take time to go, you will have to force them out.
Doing that everyday
Is your cousin’s marriage done??
Yes, finally!!
And I already gave one of my papers.
Lat paper on 23rd.
Grear
Good luck..
Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful….it shows a story…a story of two people…strange, sad and beautiful altogether…nicely done shalini…bravo!!
Nooooo this is not a story of 2 people. It is my ode to fire. There was a fire in the kitchen mom’s sari caught on fire. And she got burnt. Luckily I could out it out and she was saved with minimal burns
Totally not what I got….but I am sorry for the mishappenings….is everyone alright now?
If you read the last line, it is written below the pic. Yp this happened 5 weeks ago. Mom is better now… Healing.. Still it was a scary thing to happen
Yeah i read that….that may have been written for different reason….what I felt i commented…..anyway…its a good thing you guys are alright now…. accidents can happen right….it must have been really scary!!
Pooch mat, I was frozen for a week, couldn’t get out of the nightmare, couldn’t sleep. But time heals everything
Yeah…it sure does….I am sure you will get over this too….ready to fight always…brave warrior shalini( was it too much)😂😂
Hahaha felt like Xena the warrior princess but I will take it. It is a nice compliment. Thank you Sri
You are most welcome….its always a pleasure to write to you!!
Haan ji… It’s always wonderful when I hear from you.
Can I say something from my heart?
So many people read my post darkness but amongst the guys you are the only one who really understood the depths of my pain and I thank you with my soul for that understanding. All that pain needs is somebody to stand by when it becomes tough… And you were there standing with me, by me on that day when I wrote the post.
I appreciate and respect you for that
Thank you for such kind and humble words Shalini… You have shared so much about your life, it seems that I know you well..but still there are many areas where I cannot fathom what you must go through…but all I can do is believe in you…and I do that….for I know how it feels to have the support of anyone when it is dark outside and inside.
Maybe I will understand a little better when I am more matured…I may be blunt sometimes, but I always have a pure heart.
You make me believe among others that women are truly capable of every feat, they can overcome any situations and any obstacles put in their path….thank you for guiding me and keeping me honest.
Also, again thank you for these kind words you used for me, I am deeply honored.
Aww…. I speak nothing but the truth, Sri. I have been asked by friends after this post to get over it… This was said in such a casual and offhand manner that I was shocked. I realised then that people are not who they appear. And you understood. Indian men need a lesson in sensitivity. I wish they would interact more with the world to understand life better. It is really sad
I know….indian men has no chill….so how is everything over there….living and loving!
No Raj yet, Sri… No Raj yet…
Imtehaan ho gayi intezaar ki
Ayegi ab khabar tere yar ki😂
Hahahaha kahan kab kaise???
The three k’s….you will have to find that out yourselfs😎
Fir jaane de… No kabootar came to inform, from his side…
Haha….chithi na koi sandesh😂
Here a sample of next poem – guide me if you will please🙏
A special morning wakes you,
Sleep is flawless and you smile
Smile that brightens the room,
I see an angel on my side
When I look at that calm face,
Happiness can only come to mind
Love and peace all around,
Blowing your hairs to wake you up
Looking at me with your starry eyes,
You made my mornings from dull to bright
My life, love all is yours to spend
And you are all mine
I wish to see you by my side,
Until the day I close my eyes
She is already awakened, so hair blowing to wake her up can be changed. Smile comes consecutively, can be modified.
Thank you…little things are important write
Then don’t repeat smile, don’t repeat eyes and put a bit more emotion. Make us also realise your love for her.
But the poem works in its prest state too
Yeah…it does…but its only the first draft….was writing it and just thought to show it to you…this is the first time I am showing any work in progress…so I expect worst.
No no the poem is really good…
No it isn’t yet, because it wasn’t finished….plenty to add….and now it will be more beautiful.
Great… Aise poems likhte hain?? I didn’t know.
Haha…sahi h…sarcasm intended bhi likhna tha na….I am really dumb na😂😂😂
Omg omg no no no.. I was not sarcastic. I was learning. I didn’t know drafts bhi hota hai… So that’s why I asked..
Hey bhagwan, no sarcasm warcasm. Just honest question..
Oh really….I have 150 peoms in my drafts….wow it seems a lot as I write now….some are finished, some half and some Never to be revealed.😂😂
Wow… That’s really great… I am in total awe of you… I can’t write when I sit down to. I have only one in my draft but I will get to it sometime this month
Thats cool too…you know…one great piece will always Triumph over 1000 good one’s.
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But I am not poet Sri… You have been writing for a longer time than me… So you know better
Everyone who has a heart, has loved, has been hurt and struggles daily to survive is a poet….everyone….people all have that creative bone…some pursue it, some don’t.
Did you read my latest poem
Sri, hair blowing mat likhna, use fluttering or waving, a softer word because she is very soft
Haha… you know when we share with each better…we become better….thank you for your time….I will study all these points….and make it more beautiful.
Cool. You are the poet and you write very good poems
Yeah…ok then…I believe you….😂😂
Thank you…🙏
Yp
Why would I lie?? You don’t come in patana category 😉😉
Haha….why is that?
I don’t get those vibes from you, isliye😉😉
Well obviously not here😂😂😂😂
Yes isliye you are not in patana category ab samjhe?
Haha….sure sure 👏👏
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Thank you again